Post here to find out what Matty thinks about you!

lol I so forgot about this post.

Er, okay. SO. Here's the dang deal. This is your official crit post for Matthew. I'm totally open to comments and suggestions. Love him? Hate him? Let me know. All I ask is that you're polite.


Also, since Matthew's a kind of different sort of character, I'm going to stick a disclaimer in here that I expect you all to read before commenting.

1. AU Matt is very AU. He didn't grow up under the same circumstances as his canon counterpart and so he acts based on that that. He's still Matt but a bit more openly snarky and quick to anger (But this mostly applies to Alfred)

2. He's from Hetalia. A manga based on being satirical, stereotypical, and slightly offensive. Yes, I'm aware of stereotypes. He's going to say 'eh' every once in a while. Mostly cause its canon and mostly cause I find it funny.

3. I don't speak French. It's all Babel Fish ahaha sorry XD so yeah if it seems off, that's why. I'm going to try and not to use it as much as possible. A word here or there, but otherwise his french will be in Italics

Anyway I think that covers everything. Sorry for being paranoid D| Any questions or comments are welcomed.

[Private//Hard to hack]

It looks like I've missed a lot from not having a journal for just a few days. I can't believe the president's dead. I wonder how everyone at home's taking this. And apparently the Badlands revolutionary had something to do with it? Was it a scare tactic?

...I wonder if Al knows about this. Probably not, since we've been stuck in the same room for a while. I wonder if I should wait before I tell him. He swears up and down he isn't Ivonian anymore but ...I think he'd want to know at some point.

...And what's going on with the Fiertia? Everyone sounds like they've lost their minds. I hope this is some kind of horrible joke. I hope Chrona's okay.

[/Private]

[Filtered: Arthur Kirkland and Francis Bonnefoy//Very hard to hack]

We're okay. Alfred can't post right now because he's resting but I thought I'd let you know. Sorry if we worried you.

[/Filter]

[Filtered: 4423]

Races? We're going to plane races? That actually sounds like a lot of fun!

[Loud rapid-fire gunshots.]

There's way too many of these stupid things! Alfred's down and I'm running out of bullets! Can someone get their asses over here!?

[A whizzing sound and a few stray needles hit Matt. He shouts because a few made it through his coat.] FUCKIN' EH!

[A string of gunshots and vulgar French cursing.]

Everyone, I'm sorry but please kindly ignore my brother!

[His frantic footsteps stop and the sound of him readying one of the ship's guns.]

And try to stay out of my line of fire, please! I'm going to start shooting now!

Also if a powdermonkey isn't busy, I could use some help loading. I'll do my best to keep too many from getting to the ship!

[Private: Hard to hack.]

Something's wrong. Something is so so wrong I'm not sure how to describe it. Why would Francis say something like-! What's going on over there!?

Why is it when ever I feel like I'm taking a step forward, its in the wrong direction?


If I didn't go after Alfred ...would Francis still be safe at home?

[/Private]

[Filtered to Chrona]

Message me back as soon as you can. I heard something was happening to your ship.

[/Filter]

[Filtered to Alfred]

Have you talked to Arthur recently?

[/Filter]

[Private: Chrona //Hard to hack]

Ah... S-So, we made it out in one piece!

[/Private]

[Private: 4423 //Hard to hack]

Well... that was um. F-Fun. This isn't something the ship does normally right? Because tha--[A sharp 'THUNK' is heard and Matt crying out in surprise. He just bumped into a door frame] OW!

Darnit. I don't suppose anyone's seen a missing pair of glasses, eh? I guess I know where my first paycheck's going.

[/Private]

[Private to self //Hard to hack]

Never, ever, ever ever am I doing something like that again. Alfred can take my spot! And.

Oh man, Francis what are you thinking. If they find out that- He could be- If he doesn't do something first- [Mumbling, grumbling]

And what the hell does Arthur think he's saying! I can't come get him! Did he forgot I was on the- Right. Forget. Nevermind, what am I even saying.

[Frustrated sigh]

Maybe Yong Soo can actually keep an eye on him for me, though them both on the same ship gives me a terrible feeling. This can't end well.

[Private]</i>

[PRIVATE: Moderately Hackable//Voice]

Is it just me, or did he suddenly become more of a jerk since the last time I talked to him? I understand he's up set, but. Why did he take it out on me? I'm trying to help! [Sigh]

Figures the guy that-

No, I don't think I'll finish that thought, for my sake. I should be worrying about other things. Like this storm the Captain wants to go sailing into. What did I sign up for!? Maybe they won't need me and I can just hide in my room or something. I doubt it.

I'm already starting to feel like-- No. Keep it together, Matthew. You're a pirate! Pirates don't get airsick!

[/Private]

[Accidental PUBLIC]

Everyone remember to be careful! If any one needs--[Some gurgling. The sound of the ship hitting some turbulence and then a very pained Matthew]

-O-Oh god-!! [The journal hits the ground and there's a distant sound of uhm. Matt barfing over the side of the ship.]

Haha, well I guess I kind of jinxed myself when I said I wouldn't have to visit the medical ward. Oops.


Uhm, Penelo? Or, I guess anyone else that's a doctor. I might be dropping by, if you're in.


[Ooc: Lol Matt kind of punched Alfred in the glasses and got his hand cut. >_>]

...Oh, there we are.

[Ahem]

Uh, hello! If I did this right then I should just be talking to the 4423, right? Ah...


My name's Matthew ...Williams and I'm your new Gunner. I'm a little new to air travel but I promise to do my best!

[A pause and then as if an afterthought]

Oh, and if anyone here knows an Alfred Kirkland, could you tell him I need to speak with him? It's urgent and I heard he was on board.

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AIM/E-mail/Contact: othermenialtasks
LJ: static_roses


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